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an excellent series, but i do wish there was just a little more consistency in the post-processing treatment/presentation of each shot. just my two cents, and not a deal breaker by any means.

lovestory 1 - great flare, and dynamic quality (the splash helps add that sense of action).
lovestory 2 - simple and dreamlike, with dynamic quality (there's a connection with lovestory 1 in this sense) but the muted colors seems to disconnect with the first shot.
lovestory 3 - awesome composition. a still life that isn't - the flowing garment adds that extra touch. there's more of a 3d quality to this shot than the others - it works, but again it's different from the others enough to make me ask why. on it's own, it's great but as part of a series it's too disconnected imho. muted colors again, however and this does help to connect with the prior shot.
lovestory 4 - a really creative composition that's a great shot on it's own, and semi-related to lovestory 3, but the color/treatment is ever so slightly different.
lovestory 5 - another great shot, and the treatment seems more consistent with the previous image, so nice connection from a series perspective. i didn't like the flare/highlight in the upper left but it actually seems to add some balance to the frame that may not be there otherwise.
lovestory 6 - a great shot...the image is just great.
lovestory 7 - again, a great shot. the shooting star is perhaps a little over the top, but it's not distracting in any way.

all in all, a solid series comprised of a great individual images that could (perhaps) be tied together a little more with a consistent presentation. all fav's in my book, regardless. nice work.

:)